The cold fog mist where a tree is standing. Imagine you were standing by the tree, you see something walking towards you and the tree. You see it has crazy curly hair, limping on one side, then you see it's a zombie. You start freaking out and walk backwards, the zombie gets faster that you turn around and start running. When you look back the zombie has changed into a mysterious shadow and then you try run as fast as you can. The shadow pops up in front of you then shows it's face then disappears. You stop running, right when you stop you look around and still see the cold mist fog. Right when you trun around you see a person walking towards you then it gets closer and closer, you can see who it is.
If you guys watched "HALLOWEEN", think of this while you are imagining whats running after you. Scary! Then you look again it changes on you the little girl in "The Ring", the girl that kills people who watch a certain tape.
You start to freak out more and start running as fast as you can. You come to a house which looks like it has been abandoned by people and is in the middle of nowhere.
You go inside, right when your inside you see lots and lots of pictures hanging on the wall. You go up the stairs, as soon as you go in the room hear the door open and someone going up the stairs the it stops. You hear something in the closet, you see that the closet opened by itself wide open and you see the BOOGEYMAN. 
You quickly run out the door but then you stop because you see The Grudge up ahead coming towards you. You don't know what your doing because you have been hypnotized by the looks of it. Then black out, you don't know whats happening. You wake up in the hospital wondering if it was a dream or not.
4 comments:
Well, I don't know if I was scared from your writing or the pictures. I love scary movies, and "The Ring" and "The Grudge" were two of the scariest ones I've ever seen. I hate how those creepy little kids walk and move. Just thinking about it gives me the willies.
Hey Jackie!, for advise, you like need to cut down on say "All of a sudden" and "then". If you had put other words, I bet it would have sounded better....
lol man, you should have made it a dream. i freaked out when you said i just wake up in the hospital instead, and that made it all the more freakier, lol. i like how you combined a whole bunch of scary movies and made them into one short event involving the reader. ii liiike it :)
That is scary!!!!!! but i like how you combined the scariest movies
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